I've got a fever. And the only cure is not doing this comic!
No, seriously. I've been sick. What's your excuse?? ...Sorry, I'm being defensive, I know. That wasn't fair and I'm sorry.
Expect things to pick up from here on out. We are officially past the birthing stage. Thank you for letting me give birth into your eyes. Thank you. I'll never forget this...
...moment.
I like how this panel explodes over the whole house. It really breaks out of the past few that have all been dialog in the bathroom. I hope the pacing isn't too painful. If there is one flaw every linear webcomic has, it's that they all seem to drag on forever. There's precedence, dammit! The pacing issue has a lot to do with the page by page delivery. When you buy a comic, you get to read every page at once.
I dug out my old light box, so I'm going to try something a little different. We'll see if it pans out with the next page. This is an evolving process that's every bit about me getting good at this as it is about me telling a story.
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